Hit

The amity of it all

Is only temporary

Inhale

Hold it in

Don't let it out just yet

Exhale

Smoke clouds around me

The stench of hemp enshrouds my clothes

My skin

I'm not even here

Absent minded giggles

and mumbling of words

Incoherent

The swirly, hypnotic pipe burns my throat

And I cough

It's always better with a bong

But I don't argue

I just kind of float

I take another hit

No longer remembering why I was so tense

Doesn't matter now

I'm in a sea of green

Reality comes later.

Reviews

[Carl Drake Barnard]

Very odd wrighting Hehe,Good use of words!! :) lol I know this I know all abt this!! This should be an adultery poem Hehe I love the way it touches different people :) everyone has their own little reaction :) well done and I see now why you wrote it like this :) Have to say I would have written this from left to centre to right. You know,like the the flow you go through :) but all and all very vivid :)

[Graveyardfuck]

I didn't put this in the mature category because I myself, am under 18 years of age.

[ashesonfire]

Very interesting description, and quite accurate. I really like the "Inhale" and the "Exhale" lines. It gives you pause, and has a significance to it. Very nice.

[Kai Rollins]

Now I've never done so. But this was a very unique and vivid way to describe. Thanks for the read