When I Look At Myself

 

When I Look at Myself

When i look at myself, is it me I'm looking at?

I'd like to think I'm my own person, not someone else's doormat.

When I look at myself, is there anything inside?

Always feeling so alone, yet smiling on the outside.

When I look at myself, is there anyone to love me?

Or do I keep my thoughts so close, that no one else can see?

When I look at myself, I often feel so lost.

I'd do almost anything to feel, no matter what the cost.

When I look at myself, I sigh,

And wonder where the time has gone, how it all just flew by.

When I look at myself, I smile,

and finally feel ok, if only for a while.

Author's Note

Kinda down this day I guess. Wrote this in 2005

Reviews

[beccaz123]

This is such a good piece and I really feel I can relate to it. Good Job!

[Vaishali..^_^]

ah..!its a very nice piece...!i can relate to this...!
great work....love it..!

[Butterflymom]

I can relate to this! You have a straightforward, fresh, and raw way of expressing your emotions...I love it!