She Dances

Beautiful harmonies flood the room,

Eyes closed,

Body still.

 

She dances around the room.

Her steps tap soundlessly on the floor.

The melody carries her gracefully,

twisting and jumping

turning and laughing in happiness.

Tears well in her eyes,

The music notes hold her captive.

In free bliss she dances.

Her breathing is calm,

as she flits across the room.

Moonlight through the open window light her path.

 

Harmonious melodies sway her

fleeting form.

 

Crystal shining in her hair,

Her skin white in the starlight,

Delicate fingers trace the night air.

 

Stopping to gaze out the window,

She looks back at the still form sitting beside her,

 

Tears pore down her beautiful porceline face.

With a breath of goodbye

she brushes her small hand over the face which is hers.

 

With her face to the sky,

She steps over the sill,

The Melodious elements become her lover.

Dancing in the skies of her Father.

To Heaven she rises,

With her undying, unfaultering

Faith.

She dances.

 

Much Love,

Forever Missing you.

 

 

Reviews

[Caradoc]

The hope and joy that can be found, even in death; you portray it well in this piece. Good work.

[joshua deathdealer]

This is beautiful. Excellent write..xx

[Rae]

Very beautiful. Keep writing!!

[Becky C Strukamp]

An amazing poem. I agree with Coyote, great ending to an outstanding poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The description took me the music and the dancer. I like the flow and the desire of this poem.
"Dancing in the skies of her Father.
To Heaven she rises,
With her undying, unfaultering
Faith.
She dances."
A very good ending for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[AchingAlexandra]

This has to be one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read . Thank you for sharing the beauty of your work with others . I loved this poem so very much .

[Tasha]

This was truly amazing. It painted a beautiful picture. It also made me smile. Wonderful write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Lily Mae]

"The Melodious elements become her lover."

I love this as a whole but that line spoke a thousand words to me.. an excellent write..xx

[LivingDeath]

This piece is truly amazing. Painting a vivid picture in the readers mind. I loved it :)