Pegasus Speaks

A blended thought of Pegasus speaking as a lover.

You first saw me,
hidden in the fading light.
I was injured,
prancing and pawing,
proud, untamed, defiant.

You saw a magic in me.
One of a kind,
only to those who would see.

You knew I had vision,
you caught a shadowed glimpse,
thinking I had transformed,
to eagle's majesty.

You dared to dream,
to sit your magnificent steed.
We would know the charted lands,
held in the map of your imagination.

I would give you more,
the very wings of angels,
as we mount the heavens,
where imagination is reborn.

Together, untamed, unbridled,
we fly desires met,
beyond mortal dreams of magic,
entwined within immortality.

Reviews

[LadyAnn68]

Amazing...wow! I am in awe of this gifted write. Cherish these words

[emmajoy]

'We would know the charted lands, .. held in the map of your imagination.' What a wonderful thought!

Being able to string a few letters together then fly and fly into rapturous flight is. - positively and wonderfully decadent! To feel such a stream of emotions is wonderfully wonderful, in fact there are phrases herein that make immortality a possibility.

[David Scott]

Ah... Back when I had "wings"...
Thank you for such expressive reflection upon my poetry. This was a cry of pure joy, upon the winds of imposabity... Yet, maybe, one day? After all, Pegasus was born to "fly". 😉

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Again, I'm awed by your work... you closed this wonderful concept with such strength. Looking forward to reading more of your pen. Well done!

[David Scott]

Ah, the last stanza was the shining moment :). Thank you for reading. One poem of childish indulgence in imagination.

[Roland Petrov]

Excellent idea delivered well! I often read another poet's work and think, "I wish I'd thought of that". This is one of those.

[David Scott]

Thank you for reading. I like the Greek myths...

[s y e]

Dude, your mind is so creative... I need to borrow when my teachers us to write short storys, ahaha. I loved this, it really read so well. You really captured my attention with this. I wanted more.

Well done Pasta Man! :-)

[David Scott]

Just a taste should do fine dear noodles... ;) We don't want to get a belly ache. Ha.
Thank you for your generosity of words. You are the flavor of joy to me today. So yummy and warm with your kindness.

[s y e]

Ha, I swear I love you and your pasta jokes, makes me laugh each and every time.
It is always a pleasure.

[Kasey Miriam]

Bautiful poem. A job very well done!

[David Scott]

Thank you Kasey.

[Kasey Miriam]

you're welcome :)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

Together, untamed, unbridled,
we fly desires met,
beyond mortal dreams of magic,
entwined within immortality. ..

Best stanza ... ♥♥.......J.

[David Scott]

Hey JJ! Woop woop! You got it. ;)
Thank you for reading and reviewing this.

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

You r welcome...........................J.

[Sami Khalil]

Wow. This is wonderful from your talented pen. You map the imaginations and charter the dreams indeed...A wonderful message here too...:)................

[David Scott]

Thank you Sami. Just dreaming again. :)

[Sami Khalil]

Nothing wrong with that. It produces wonderful works...You are welcome...:).................

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I envision a place of solace...where imagination is free to roam "untamed",
and dreams are embraced..

What captivates me the most is the transformation that takes place, when a fading soul is reborn once again...
The metamorphosis of immortality is a beautiful thing to witness!

Thank you for spreading your wings, penning through Pegasus's thoughts...Nice!
A Unique write~xoxo~:)

[David Scott]

The inspiration comes and the poetry writes itself...
Yes, the transformation is amazing.
read moreThe inspiration comes and the poetry writes itself...
Yes, the transformation is amazing.
Thank you very much for your comments and insight.