Reading this brings me to a place where trust and friendship evolve... to something quite special.
You truly leave an imprint on every heart you touch.... such a wonderful thing to cherish!
This is no ordinary thought, Sweet Unicorn... these are words of comfort for a caged soul.
A heartfelt write!~xoxo~:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. :)
Yes, heartfelt and inspired by true friendship.
Your comments are uplifti.. read moreThank you. :)
Yes, heartfelt and inspired by true friendship.
Your comments are uplifting to me as well.
A little thought? Really? If I were the subject of said poem, I would be smitten. This is a fantastic write, and it is subtly romantic, but very loving. A great poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
...ahh... Thank you KL. You are kind to me. I do hope this thought helps others experience their ow.. read more...ahh... Thank you KL. You are kind to me. I do hope this thought helps others experience their own healing.
I don't have much to add to the reviews below, David, but I just happened on this one and it struck an emotional chord with me, and isn't that the hallmark of a good poem? I had to let you know. It is indeed comforting and inspirational.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
I agree with you. Thank you giving me the feedback. I'm happy this write was relatable.
OH MY...the comforting nature of this poem drew me in between the lines. There is such love, such empathy, such caring in ever line! People do not trust in themselves enough. This poem is like a booster shot of self-esteem, David. Absolutely wonderful work. Lydi**
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Lydi. I wrote this poem feeling a deep sense of caring and empathy. I'm happy the mood tra.. read moreThank you Lydi. I wrote this poem feeling a deep sense of caring and empathy. I'm happy the mood translated well in the writing.
You make a wonderful point that healing and the subsequent flight goes much faster when words of encouragement create a feather bed of peace and friendship.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you for giving me encouraging feedback Blue. You are very kind to do so.
I enjoy hearin.. read moreThank you for giving me encouraging feedback Blue. You are very kind to do so.
I enjoy hearing your voice.
This is so beautiful and inspirational. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear poet. I see you already knew you have a voice. ;)
Thank you for sharing your vo.. read moreThank you dear poet. I see you already knew you have a voice. ;)
Thank you for sharing your voice with me today.
Thank you heroic poet.
This was for a friend and a lesson to myself as well...
We need .. read moreThank you heroic poet.
This was for a friend and a lesson to myself as well...
We need to find the courage not only to heal, but to fly again when the healing has come to us...
11 Years Ago
And you convey that message in perfect pitch.
11 Years Ago
Ha... I am glad you hear the music. :)
Thank you once again. You are kind.
kind of saying, find sanctuary in my words, as i find in yours...and we will sing our love for one another boldly...
nothing like poetic friends for comfort...they understand.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
You always see through me well Jacob. It is good to know my intentions are recognizable.
Than.. read moreYou always see through me well Jacob. It is good to know my intentions are recognizable.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing everything I post. You are a constant source of support.
I read this in haste at first (because I had to eat lunch) and quite didn't get it. But when I came back and slowed down my reading pace, I I found comfort in this poem, David. Soothing, tranquil... I love the last stanza where you stated "boldly cry out your truth/bathe in the echo of your voice". It's powerful and uplifting.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Arzel.
You did see the power here... Good. To loose our fears we need to feel empo.. read moreThank you Arzel.
You did see the power here... Good. To loose our fears we need to feel empowered.
Much like you...
Still, I can only ever be to you what you are willing to see of me. This is true of us all.
May we learn to see the best in each other.
I am happy to be friends with anyon.. more..