You have been,
are still
and will ever be,
my comfort.
When the knee
of life gets skinned,
tears drying
upon the chaffed cheek
of undeserved sorrow,
your kindness binds
a salve of wellbeing;
warm gentle attention is
my bandaid of joy.
Lessons giving
the vaccination of
cold hard fact,
reality unfairly insisting
a needled penetration,
immunizing against
childish wishes;
your smile assuring
my lollipop reward.
Today it seems impossible,
bitter and beyond
a gagged reflex,
fighting to stomach
an unthinkable, undrinkable
cup of suffering;
still stinging, longing
for bandaid comfort
and lollipop satisfaction.
You have been,
are still
and always will be,
my comfort.
This is a poem relates to me as unconditional love between parent and child and the eventuality of death of the loving parent...I may be wrong, but it was a comfort because I have been there
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I'm glad you found a little bit of comfort here. Thank you for reading.
That second stanza grabbed me I had to read that several times. Pure poetic brilliance, I wished I wrote those exquisite lines. the rest of the poem just flowed from there so nicely penned. Great work David
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much. Your words are very encouraging. I am so happy you enjoyed it.
Very lovely words of what your love brings to your life. Well penned.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you for reading Will. True comfort is found in the Spirit of Love... Yet we see elements of t.. read moreThank you for reading Will. True comfort is found in the Spirit of Love... Yet we see elements of the Devine in our relationships every day.
Be well my friend.
Beautifully written. A child emerges seeking comfort. Could be the kind and reassuring words
we received as children that everything is going to be okay. Adult world is more compromising and accepting. One time I was very ill and I called my mom's old phone number. It had been disconnected for a long while. She had passed away. I wanted to tell her I was not feeling well so she could tell me I would be okay. Strangely enough I was not the only one who had done that. Others have admitted to it as well.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
We are this comfort to those we live with and choose to love...
I am glad your mother gave yo.. read moreWe are this comfort to those we live with and choose to love...
I am glad your mother gave you such love as to carry years beyond her physical presence.
Thank you for reading.
This is sweet :) I love the metaphor of band aids and lollipops as one giving you comfort. A warm heartfelt sentiment and beautifully and creatively written, my friend
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I'm very glad you enjoyed it. Thinking of my friends...
Gentle, soft, loving. When you find the person who is your comfort, you are a lucky person. There is innocence mingled with romance here. "Lollipop satisfaction"...brilliant! Lydi**
😍 What a beautiful sentiment penned and expressed for an equally beautiful soul😍 It would be so amazing to know at least one like this in our lives, should we be so lucky😃
Loved this one!
Alisa💫
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
So glad you enjoyed the write. Sending you a "lollipop" for having the strength of heart to dream, w.. read moreSo glad you enjoyed the write. Sending you a "lollipop" for having the strength of heart to dream, write and share. You are giving bandaids to those in need every time you share an honest part of yourself with another.
Thank you.
10 Years Ago
Yum! 🎉. Thank you! Sending you smiles across the miles😃😀😊
Much like you...
Still, I can only ever be to you what you are willing to see of me. This is true of us all.
May we learn to see the best in each other.
I am happy to be friends with anyon.. more..