G-Zero

5572.

Strands of poetry

leaking from eardrums,

past consciousness to your dreams:

Phase one.

Skeletal muscle

falling from your bones,

falling straight out your window:

Phase two.

Strips of brain tissue

pouring out your gut,

crawling underneath your bed:

Phase three.

Blades of emotion

cutting through steel bars,

eating from the underside:

Destruct.

Reviews

[Andrew Vaughn]

enjoyed the read im afraid i cant offer much more onto this good piece though

[Raivenne]

God how I LOVE that opening stanza.

[darkgurl]

Blades of emotion
cutting through steel bars,
eating from the underside:
Destruct.

I like these lines here, I think this is a deep write from the inside.
A very well written tangled up with powerful emotion.