Shadow

Why not

Scream for me.
For I can not anymore.
Its why I listen now.
The anger,
You represent.
Everything I wanted too say.
Every ounce of blood lost,
Its become the shadow,
I take shelter under.
Become the voice,
I dare not too have.

Author's Note

I welcome all criticism

Reviews

[olla]

well done.. the acceptance of anguish is tangible.. it read well and flows smoothly..

[Semaj]

I was once told that my writting is rythmatic, as I love learning about music theory. But I guess this one was by accident. It was simply why I listen too death metal.