Suffication

Meh

Words spoken within a whisper
As rage slowly chokes you
Speaking words unspoken
Only too echo back
A voice with a louder tone
Fueling one's rage.
Giving the key too unlock the clinched jaw.
Chose a vacant path
Destroy everything in your wake
As you slowly beging too breathe once more.
As the end of the walk bring suffocation
When another begins too breathe.

Author's Note

I welcome critic

Reviews

[Alexa Nichols]

A few word errors (too many "too"s 😅), but otherwise, I loved it! Good job!

[Semaj]

Yeah I have a problem with this. Thank you for the critic.