Rest

i peek into my head

Paints run together,

patterns in the sky.

Invisible appearances,

water painted rocks.

Birds the color of ideas,

soar through heavenly rivers.

 

Cobolt spirits flee through open mouths,

in search of better places.

But there is no place better,

than where you are now.

In the saltwater caves,

of unfathomable minds.

Reviews

[Robert]

wonderful use of word choice and free form. i love the style ur going for in ur poetry. its very new age, almost hippieish however with a wide vocabulary of a scholar. it reminds me of jim morrison or ram daas. id really love to read something from u that paints a picture however, something that puts my in a room with the situation. Try to bring in the senses

[Jim Lozkittle]

Very good. I like it alot your view into your mind is vagur but complex at the same time, the imagery could be seen broadly in my mind in many different aspects, similar to how a mind works lol very good poem

[Alexa Aiden]

I absolutely love this! Every line is wonderful! I could really picture your words in my mind, and they're beautiful!