Untouchable

short and simple

Near, but never close.

Scared, of me?

Please, let me in.

Don’t, let me down.

Because I cant handle, even one more fall.

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

Nothing to add but EXCELLENT
regardless its shortness, this poem's so heartfelt and heart-warming ^^
_another great poem from you :)

[Jim Lozkittle]

Hoping for someone to reach out and grab your hand in hopes for them to save you when you can't do it yourself. Very deep despite the simplicity

[Hello, Goodbye]

Its a very curious collection of words... Im not sure that I understand its meaning but the way its written it certainly makes me want to..

[Creepy Swine Guy]

Ah yes. Who among us thinks that he or she can endure one more fall. I like the pleading, trusting tone. Well presented.