Today

Today has been long and seems to be unending

I wish I could wake and find I had been dreaming

Today was one that left me on the brink of screaming

 

Today has been one that has left me in hell

My mind is breaking as I have no answer to tell

Today I must let all this information gell

 

Today has left me far past tired

Other's lives I have admired

Today was one i have not desired

 

Tomorrow will be no better than today

That's what I'm going to say

Yet tomorrow is a new day

Author's Note

Okay so it's horrid but it's something new and i haven't really written in well a few months...

Reviews

[Aggie Skeleton]

So true days never seem to end and tomorrow will always be better. Luv this poem.

[J.M]

I agree with the rest... you're just wrong about this being horrid, its completely true and unflinchingly honest. I also love the ending, almost like it could be better but...probably wont be which many of us feel most of the time.

[DarkLovingRaven]

Nice write. I can relate to this. I've seen you do better though (:

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime a new day don't bring hope and happiness. Must go forward hoping for a break. I like this poem. Lately most of my days are lost and confused in useless things. A outstanding poem. You made me think this morning.
Coyote

[Dwayne]

I can certainly agree with the sentiment in this one, especially this point in the semester. I want to have tea in the mornings, but its definitely a coffee morning. This poem makes me think of those morning, which seem to follow one another this time of the semester.

[Stef Outsiders]

I agree its not horrid! But beautifully expressed... well done!
when you get days like that, even if you don't write really well, just write anyway no matter how bad it is... you probably been told this before but hey, I'm repeating it lol

[Ghost]

I kinda like it. ( :

[GTVile]

Its not horrid. It gets the point across, right? So... I don't see an issue at all. Sometimes the feeling takes precedence over form. This is one of those cases, and you captivated the theme strikingly. So good!

[A.Lee]

Definitely not horrid. its very good actually, especially because I think pretty much everyone can relate to it in some way. Everyone has been there at least once. Nice work.

[Gomer LePoet]

Yes. tomorrow is another day. And it just might be that perfect day we dream about. A part of the greatness has to come from within though, so dream on.