Lost

I was lost,

he found me.

I was sad,

he made me happy.

I felt alone,

he told me he loved me.

I had no where to go,

he said he was my destiny.

I was happy,

he left me.

I'm lost.

Reviews

[Phill Oz O'fee]

Lost can also mean ‘gone astray’ – deception in love is not being lost – it is being abandoned. Poetically poignant bitter sweet write – wonderful share! :-)

[Govind singh]

Nice...small but deep..:)

[Donna]

In glad that your friend told you to share your writing! I really liked that one! Keep writing!