Journey

Again, words demand to be set free.

PR: wait...  I: wait...  L: wait...  LD: wait...  I: wait... wait...  CY: wait...  I: wait...  L: wait...  YCat: wait...  I: wait...  Top: wait...  I: wait...  L: wait...  C: wait...  SD: wait...

FF

 

Hold onto glimpsing glancing glowing

Just try and stop the feeling free flowing.

Connect into pure perfection proving

That love is mostly mainly moving

It seeks itself, reaching roaming ripping

And crashes into tumbling tangling tripping

Focal point completion connection consuming

And life grows, blossoming, beautiful, blooming.

 

 

Author's Note

Again, no schematics comments, thanks.

Reviews

[tarasov]

it's great. i loved reading it out loud, it was really fun and really says something to me...
thanks for sharing.
Tarasov.

[LSS]

Absolutely love it. What wonderful form and talent. You've got amazing verse here, not forced nor cramped, just edging toward your conclusion. Very nice.
Lar

[Una Xoto]

This is alive. It captures love as the living creature it is. I love the way this piece flows like a river...much like love. Love is something which can never stay still or it will stagnate & wither. This is a really great piece.

[John A Common]

I think it is just stunning. A wonderfull poem.