Free-Falling Alone...

I sputter when I spit and spatter, taste of matter, waste of grave rattle

Brave hatter, mad gravity grafter, laughter disaster, gray pitter-patter 

The rains of brains after the lame-after-ache, same pass-and-take, please often make rainbows exist in travels, burned tomes are learned, unravel more paste and batter

Rags-n-Aberrations 

After the master gabber, I'm a faster blaster, a mix of traveler 'n' masker

Basket of basking travesty, carnival blur carved in mirth...

An alabaster bur

A word unheard... A song unlearned

Like bong of worth stirred and perched

I'm slurped and burped...

Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth

I'm earnest in turning over every stone

unfurling my throne

no one is owed...

I'm free-falling on my own 

Reviews

[Island Hippy]

Aloha silente, old skool for days! Nui (much) kudos for your swerve and flow.
Loved this....

"An alabaster bur
A word unheard... A song unlearned
Like bong of worth stirred and perched
I'm slurped and burped...
Stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"

Izzy

[apennylate]

Hii, Hippy of the Islands...! Thanks for the drop-in, appreciate it much, especially the old-school appreciation and swaggish insight...

[Abhishek Asthana]

simply wow,, don't have words to describe... amazing job done !!

[apennylate]

Simply a review with no words to describe, except amazing...! Thanks, AA...

[Ruth]

As always, your wording and tempo kick a*s :) A most curious write that rendered me embedded in the clouds somewhere lol Awesome...

[apennylate]

Thanks, PRS... As always, you humble me with such kind words... I hope to find those clouds on a more permanent basis, to be honest, heh...

[Ruth]

lol You are welcome hon :)

[andrew mitchell]

i loved the fast flowing pace which you master well. what a ride!

[apennylate]

Your review is a ride, thank you, AM...

[asperatus_]

I'm earnest in turning over every stone
unfurling my throne
no one is owed...
I'm free-falling on my own

BOOM!

[apennylate]

Boom...! Thanks, Asper....!

[angelina neves]

Lovely! the end is fantastic:
"I'm earnest in turning over every stone
unfurling my throne
no one is owed...
I'm free-falling on my own "

[apennylate]

Thanks so much, Angelina... Glad you enjoyed it

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

You ARE the Master Gabber! Mos Def! Love it! "Slurped and burped...stripped of dirt, the earth is burnt in crispy birth"- Whaaaaa?! Excellent free-fall!!

[apennylate]

Hah, why thank you, Anne... Excellent review... I DO try to be a master gabber...

[Joey Nizz]

You have a pretty good flow of rhymes going on in this one!
The rhythm of your words are really artistic, well done Silente.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Joey... Means a lot coming from such a positive writer as yourself

[Joey Nizz]

Your welcome ^^

[Kesha]

You certainly like the word Alabaster :P wonderful piece as always :)

[apennylate]

Ikr... I tend to go through phases of loving words... Last month it was "insatiable"... I have a feeling this month it is going to be "ambrosia" or "osmosis"... Haha

[Kesha]

Haha yeah i find myself using certain words more than others as well lol

[Hebe]

I like the sing song rhythm.... amazing way you weaved this path of discovery..... :)

[apennylate]

Amazing review, Hebe, thank you...

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words and thoughts.
"I'm earnest in turning over every stone
unfurling my throne
no one is owed...
I'm free-falling on my own "
I liked the above lines a lot and I could feel the emotion in the strong description. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[apennylate]

Thank you for sharing this outstanding appreciation, Coyote...

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.