Emulating Stars of Maybe

Emulating stars of maybe in May, hey baby, ray stuns and gravy

I'm alive and unfettered bravely

I'm better than wetter dogs with rabies, a slave to crazy, still jive and raving

Dime shot on sight, creeping hog tied up tight, and I'm slightly light in the pockets

Mark-it and hearken, steady ready caulk-it

Off-it like rockets I'm parkin' and stalkin' on foot at the market

I stray when I pursue loose grooves with my pick...

No-stop-it

Can't slick-pin her, hoppin' to the sloppin', and next target is barkin'

I'm farther than a garden guarded by sovereign guardians pawin' 'n' slobberin' 

Lower than drains clogged with pain runnin' on sugar-bane

Can it tame the blame that I swing wildly like a cane

Like a similie for lame, I'm lamer than lame

Now steady aim and pray we can coast today, mope and sway

Lay to rest grace, but sashay when slain

Sass and flame?

Hah...

Might as well use our brains.

Use our lanes to go nowhere, or somehere I never know, but something has to flow

Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes

The corpse is coarse, of course I'm morose

The host is boasted roast, and I'm hoisting oats to make up gropes in the dark

I'm not dark I swear I'm far from it, an ark of ravens slayin' carpets

Now the pavement calls me, need a beat-back symphony to make it...

No problem

You lay the six by me, and I'll do the farmin'

Just remember...

No sobbin' 

Reviews

[Richard McLin]

Love the line about being better than wet dogs with rabies.

This is a great piece. another one that just proves what a poetry force you are. I love writing poetry, and a few of my pieces are some of the best things I've written, but I can't force it, and it can be tricky to come up with new poems. Reading your work is truly inspiring. Thank you for that. Great job.
-Richard

[apennylate]

Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken a minute to reply! Been away for a while. Glad to be an inspiration!

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

This is such a creative piece! And so powerful too. Keep it going!

Love,
Vasilees.

[apennylate]

Def' attempting to keep going, heh... Thank you, V

[Poetic Beauty]

Ahh light in the pocket and lamer than lame. This poor soul is down on their luck and out of time. Love the flow and word choices. Keep on slurring it.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Poetic, I will try...

[Amber]

It was a powerful piece, very well done.

[apennylate]

Appreciate hearing that, Amber

[wordman]

great story,very creative

[apennylate]

Thank you, Wordman

[Sami Khalil]

"something has to flow
Indeed it knows the deed of rose, and crows that fold and blow on slopes"

A country girl feeling to this with pizzazz and toughness to her. Take no prisoners kind of attitude, enjoy while you can or lose it all. The star is flashing bright upon the slopes so walk in its brightness or stay in the shadows. Excellent and with a great vibe...:).............

[apennylate]

I am glad you enjoyed, Sami, and thank you so very much

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. ...:::))))

[3mptyness]

It has a nice rappy vibe to it. Pretty good use of words tho.

[Hosimone]

It does! That was how I read the whole thing; as a rap.

[apennylate]

Thank you, friend, I can spit everything I write, so... I would hope it sounds like a rap, heh

[apennylate]

Yup, Holly, I def' use bars

[Hosimone]

Hahaha. I love your style, Silente. You must tell me how in the world you do it. =]

[apennylate]

A few people have asked me that, not many seem to believe it is rather simple, heh... Thanks again, again, Holly... Means a lot to see such enthusiasm over writing

[Mr.Writer]

Wowzie! Another action packed, engaging poem that again took me on an adventure!
You have a good vocab Silente, as it really shows in your poetry!
Ray stuns and gravy, really interesting... :D
Well done, keep it up!

[apennylate]

Heh, thank you, Mr.

[Maria]

Great job as always, enjoyed reading this in full.

[apennylate]

Thank you, Maria