Billy Thoghen and the Monumental Mistake

"She, is Monumentally Ugly"
 Whispered Billy Thoghen
 as he pointed his stubby finger
 in the direction
 of an Angel.

 Had he have Known-
 Had I have Known,
 The world would have loved
 Her. With her radiant taste.
 Peach-Mango-Kiwi-Malibu-Rum

 Like a straw
 Billy Thoghen sucked all the juicy flavour
 Right out of her
 With his Pistol.

 The Angel- Margret Malou
 Lay melting on the sidewalk like an ice cream cone
 mid-July.

Monumentally Dead.

 

 

Reviews

[Skelasoldier]

hmmm, good job on this poem, good personification use all throughout this piece of writing, keep up the good work