FLIPPER

FLIPPER

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh
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Silly guy on his way to the big game----

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FLIPPER
 
She flipped her golden locks
He flipped his wallet open
She flipped him one quick glance
And he flipped
 
He flipped some guys the bird
They flipped him one right back
And when he flipped they laughed
For they were a flipp`n lot
 
They flipped when they got the news
They flipped their silly top
`Cause flipp`n made them ill
They lost their flipp`n spot
 
The flipp`n team was `bout to play
And no flipp`n ticket found
He stamped his foot and shook his fist
His wallet on the flipp`n ground
 
Just `cause she flipped her hair
He flipped his flipp`n mind
His head no longer there
He lost his ticket and missed the game
She`ll never flipp`n care
 
---- Eagle Cruagh

© 2008 Eagle Cruagh


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This really made me smile, the first stanza drew me right in. I like the way you use the one word for a range of different uses eg flippin lot, flipped the bird. amazing the way an idea however fleting can bcome a great poem!

Posted 17 Years Ago


this is funny...:)

Posted 17 Years Ago


Very good and very funny. I can just picture him!
Should have kept his wits about him and not strayed from the task at hand!

Posted 17 Years Ago


Cute use of a single thought. Unique.

Posted 17 Years Ago


Very cute. I thought it was fun and playful. Thank you for sharing!

Posted 17 Years Ago


funny.

Posted 17 Years Ago


disturbing.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I flippin loved it!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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JC
The best and sometimes the worst thing about the English language, it's multiple meanings for one single word. This was such a great play and the flow was effortless.

Kudos!

JC



Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a fun piece of work! Read twice, laughing; if I read again, I'll be hysterical! Great play with words, and, the metre carries them along. Amazing what a woman can flipp'n well do and, well!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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