WHERE ?

Remenisce about where have all the girls gone

WHERE  ?

 

Della, my Della, where ?

You were fourteen with Auburn hair

I loved you then when you were there

But, now you are where ?

 

Sweet What`s her name, where ?

I don`t know about her hair

But, she was certainly all there

Now you are where ?

 

Triva, my defender, where ?

Legs all the way up to her hair

She fought for me with a girlish flair

But, now you are where ?

 

Tiny I remember well, where ?

St. Vitus dance and all, I swear

Never wore any underwear

But, now you are where ?

 

Ah, Vivian ! There`s a tale, where ?

Pulled me down and broke the chair

Pledged her love in a secret lair

But, now you are where ?

 

Lois, busty, sweet and fair

Saw her first with my friend, Jere

Made time with her and paid the fare

Now you are where ?

 

Now girls my book is bare

We have no more time to spare

My old spurs hang by yonder stair

But, now you are where ?

 

---- Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Lyrics for a song, lyrics for a song!

What a great rhythmic flow of words. In parts, it's quite fuuny, but, that repeated last line in each stanza/verse makes it sad too, because that's the love of your life... i thi-i-i-nk. The others were the flowers that faded, but 'you are where' is with you still.

You write in so many different styles and about so many different themes.

Thanks lots for sharing.

[Brown Eyed Girl]

That's sweet, wonderful and sad all wrapped up in one little bundle. I love that the memory of each girl holds such unique meaning to you. I very much enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing it.

[Dani California]

This is wonderful!
For some reason when I first
began reading this I thought of
"Michelle My Belle" by the Beatles..

Not sure why, but it's what came to mind.
Your rhyme and flow are magnificent throughout.

Very well done! I truly enjoyed this :)

[Ms Jessica Renee]

I loved it. The way you wrote about a different girl and still kept a flair, was marvelous. Well done.

[Debbie_Philly]

OH I LOVE this..... I really do. You are such a talented poet.... I love your work!!! Keep em coming !!