A HAPPENING

Toungue in cheek we lament lost reason

A HAPPENING

 

This just came out

you see

But it don`t make sense you say

Fine ! I confess you are right

Just say nay

 

Done in celebration of a rant

But, where`s the sense in that ?

Oh, just scroll down

You will find a common ground

Teacher said don`t say can`t

 

Oh, shucks !  Supposed to rhyme

But, it`s not supposed to reason

Just say some words and all agree

But, that would be treason

It`s not supposed to be `bout me

 

To save you further tears

I close this mess amid your fears

That you`ll find more like this

And it will spoil your bliss

Reason will rear it`s ugly head

`Fore you know it you`ll be read

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Tracie Skarbo]

This was a cute and funny write. I loved the way you speak directly to the reader. it makes it so much more personable. :)

Tigra

[Last Lying Look]

I really liked this.
It's very interesting and full of character!
Excellent write!!
I look forward to reading more from you next time I'm on
-Elissa

[Hanan_Maliah]

I must say that I enjoyed the way you scattered your rhyming of words and the whole of it was fun as well...

[just is]

Awesome! write here, This I throughly enjoyed. It's cute as well as truthful.

[ANNA]

I am amazed by the rthymes in this piece, I found this to be funny but also clever.
Wines smells of color not of moled my friend!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Poetry is like a fine wine, if it sits around
long enough it will begin to stink.
-----Eagle Cruagh