SOUND ON SOUND

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SOUND ON SOUND

 

 

Come hatch an onomatopoeia

With only the wind and rain

Without the stink of gia

And the storm to ease the pain

 

Where man begets

And friends will not allow

The pain of disassociation

Will almost always follow

 

The moral is

No rightful fellow

Will do his biz in vain

In a random run

With the work all done

The sun will shine again

 

------Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Cherrie]

What a great opening ..Come hatch an onomatopoeia With only the wind and rainWithout the stink of gia And the storm to ease the pain.. Very nice poem

[Rick Puetter]

Dear Eagle Cruagh,

Your words are alway clever. I like that. Yeah, what about all this Gia stuff. The poem is short and sweet.

Very nice.

Best regards,

Rick

[@zeewhykay]

Very well put together,

''Where man begets
And friends will not allow
The pain of disassociation
Will almost always follow''

Very strong.

[LatoyaEvans]

I loved this, Great Work.

[Meredith Leigh]

That was really cool!
I liked it!
Great work!

- Kriss

[C.L. Wilson]

"Come hatch an onomatopoeia"
"Without the stink of gia"
nice rhyme here and really great moral. Very true.

[Limitality]

This piece makes you stop to think,
and like many great poems, you must read twice.
I very much like this one, very good job.

[StrawberryDream]

haha I will never know how you do it, but again, a keeper...
In each of your poems, your skillful voice shines through with your personality and I always want more more more. :3
"In a random run
With the work all done
The sun will shine again"
xox

[Debra Stevens Edwards (..]

This took me by surprise The first thing I thought of was the wind rustling the leaves.The piece was invigorating as well as insightful. Well done My Friend as always.
Hugs Debby

[just is]

This is wonderful, I found this inspiring as well. wonderful write here.