WHO --- IN THE WORLD

Can you find the girl from the description ?

 

 

WHO -- IN THE WORLD

 

Prettier girls, must be

Have seen not all

Wonder if she

No, she is much too sweet

Does she

No, imagination is not enough

 

Speak languages maybe

Not wasted on the multitude

In love perhaps

No, she is above that

Now here is a thought

 

Just examine her

find the nubbins of

Little wings sprouting

Just there

She`s a bloody Angel

 

-----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

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Who has not found themselves, at some stage, aloof from life and searching their world for a connection. Its all here in this contemplating poem. I see the writer standing on the clifftop and looking down over his sea of connections, searching for the only one that can turn the key. He holds his precious wish list in his hands and with his eyes closed, he slips beneath the glossy surface of life and allows 'feeling' to find that longed for connection and in doing so, discovers an angel.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

i love the sort of cut off thoughts you use, as if i am peering inside the narrator's mind..