ALL THEY WANT

 

 

ALL THEY WANT

 

He loves her and she loves he

They do the dance of love

They putter and fume and

Finally   they just wannabe

 

She`s divine , an angel

He`s a cowboy with a beard

They can`t seem to get it on

She`s fallen for a nerd

 

This has been goin on for long

History is full of this

She`s ho-hum  and

He`s a duh !

It`s a match !!!!

 

----Eagle Cruagh

Reviews

[Krista Harris]

I just love this! Being neither a ho-hum or a duh, the humor is not lost on me. When one stands out as outside of the norm or unapologetically strange or even just intelligent as we artistic souls tend to do, a "match" is so much harder to find. Still, it's so much fun to chuckle at the ridiculous nuance of it all.

[closed account]

lmao!!! this was funny, really funny I loved
the last part!! enjoyable read!

[Pink!]

love this poem!

[J.Black]

What a bitter sweet symphony this piece is! Intelligent and very playful, indeed opposites do attract!

[Alicante lullaby]

witty,fun and intelligent,small and flowy,loved how it tasted,spice and sweet,,,

[Jola]

Poem full of feelings fell music in it... and love .A very good job!!!

[Liza]

so simple in theory right...

[emmajoy]

Oh deahhhhh! There's a mix of fun and cynicism in this, in fact it's humourous side accentuates the meaning.

Love it .. in spite of its 'bite'!

[Simone]

lol, great poem. I loved the last verse ^_^ Wonderfull job

[Ellen Hammond]

This sounds more bitter/sweet to me. Perhaps because I've been there in the cowboy's position. But I did chuckle in through the last verse.