MASS FORENSIC

MASS FORENSIC

A Poem by Eagle Cruagh

MASS FORENSIC
 
Cumberland Gap to Pioneer
Down the wicker wound
Figure the numbers
Of multiplicity and sum
 
Tortuous rambling or subtle
Stealth the basic marks our path
To do a graph of progress made
Brings human kind to task
 
Gorgeous flowing life traipse
Passion and travail
The ending leaves a plus mark
Negativity gets the tail
 
-----  Eagle Cruagh

© 2011 Eagle Cruagh


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Errrr methinks this is a study of what life's all about, what we do good and bad, a case of arriving with a cry of 'i did it but, this is even better!?'

Some fine meter in this tho not sure if I've understood it right.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Well if you wanted to mess with my mind...you did. lol
Is the message about the calculation of one self-worth? Karma...yes it must be about karma.....

The ending leaves a plus mark
Negativity gets the tail

yes yes...karma that is it?

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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