Loneliness

Sometimes I find myself wondering about loneliness. That was the thing that scared me the most. The dark feeling, conquering every inch of my body and soul, fearing the emptiness, the physical pain of a broken soul which has to live alone.

But I’m not alone, I’m surrounding by life. I’m alive. And even if I’m a big mess, I’m wonderful in such exciting ways that is hard to explain. So I decide to be enough for myself, loved me and protected me, fight for my ideas and argue with my thoughts, to become wiser than I was before.

I choose myself in front of anyone else, not in a selfish way, but in a truly honest and loyal way. Because when the hardest time comes is myself who I can count first, so it's me, the one who I choose loving first.

Reviews

[Aswin R Prasad]

Great write.. Loved how the negative and dark feeling in the first stanza changes to positive and light one.. Loneliness indeed is a dark place where nobody wants to be in.. You've written it excellently..

And not to be rude, But can i just point out something real quick ? :)
It should be "Sometimes i find myself wondering about loneliness " instead of "Sometimes I found myself wondering about loneliness" right ?

Thanks for sharing :)

[Elle Alley]

Thank you! I really appreciate the corrections, english is not my first language and sometimes I mess up :)

[Aswin R Prasad]

No problem.. Your always welcome .. Keep Writing! :)

[Pathtaken]

Love this one. You will never find any type of satisfaction in love, or any thing until you are connected and happy with yourself. This should be framed and hung on the wall for everyone to see. Beautifully written.

[Inject Positivity]

That is an amazing reminder of how to live happily in a simple way....We have to love ourself for who we are, even if we have flaws, we have to accept ourself first....We are imperfect people and we need to take that in mind.....Loneliness will hit us any time but if we become our own best frnd those lonely moments will not look that much lonely.....What a superb work my frnd....Hats off to you.....Inspiration at its best....Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! .....Full ratings....

[JustaManWithaPen]

I like this story worded perfectly to me very well rounded great job!!