Karma

This poem was written by: Erica.

Conflict hatin'
been debatin'
is livin' worth the

troubled times are
blowin in the tide's a comin'
rushin' fast like lightening

strikes the field's a burnin'
to just let go and see
what's gonna be on the
wing what goes around
comes around ...have you been good?

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Esana Bridges]

Sounds like a rap (which I like ~). I like how you use cliched phrases to your advantage in conveying the idea of karma. I like the references to nature and the unpredictability of life. And the last line: "...have you been good?" I'm not sure if it's supposed to, but let me tell you, it sent shivers down my spine (I've almost resolved to be a good little girl from now on. :P)

[Anonomys]

hun you got talent. i love how you took all those sayings and put them together to mean something. pretty deep.

[EDRC]

Thank you so much for reading, I will tell Erica when I see her at school tomorrow. (She didn't get to check comments tonight because she had a Halloween Party.)

~Ryan.