Fading Smile

lost, i think.

I had your blood on me,

That time we made love,

water fell, detached our fears,

.....I will  always remember every motion.

 

I had your soul locked within my vision,

that time we transcended into steam,

when two lovers experienced life's only elation,

 two lovers lived in a reality, few ever know

 

I had your love in a moment beyond imagination,

in a place a dream once took me.

And the enviroment reminds me of you,

And I sit in a shadow shaded by nothing,

...And my memories... are just fading smiles....

 

 

Reviews

[Penny Dreadful]

I can really sense the passion and loss in this poem.

good work.

xxxx

[poetic soul]

loved the title and its very well justified in the poem... the memory that you are talking about in the poem, is a pain thats etched to the heart and shall always remain fresh in the memory's core... :) lovely expressions...

nice flow...

Regards,
Poetic Soul