Elephants & Coyotes

Are my scars saying words,
Too frankly to you?

What of my wounds,
That have yet to heal?

Is my courage too loud,
For you, Sir Proud -

Am I too brokenly real?

© 2011 Elephants & Coyotes

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Judy Ponceby

Excellent. So much in so few words, and just ambiguous enough to entice the reader to place their own spin. Wonderful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

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