A Newer Testament

it's really simple, after all

Only, only, ever only

The way that nature sees itself.

Humble, yes, but never lowly-

A selfless pride that must be felt.

Think not yourself above your neighbor, 

But keep your neighbor humble, too.

Give not your soul to gods or strangers,

Nor think that souls belong to you.

Reviews

[Vertigo Cat1111]

I loved this. Your words are so wise and true and are ringing with the Universe’s words. It is simple, isn’t it? I think I know what you mean with this poem. I feel a sense of peace and respect with this. Everything we need is here, with us and it’s a blast when we make the most of it. Thank you for sharing. I also adored the title of this poem, extremely clever.

[Earthrise]

thank you so much for this extremely nice review. i'm thrilled that you were able to get so much out of these few words. i hope the peace and respect you get from this idea reaches its full potential in your life, and everyone's for that matter

[Lydia Shutter]

Very wise words. I liked this philosophical write. Lydi**

[Earthrise]

thanks for stopping by, Lydi. i'm glad you liked it

[Miss Sharon]

I agree with Carlos...there is a lot of wisdom in this well written post. I enjoyed reading very much. ~Sharon

[Earthrise]

thank you for your kindness, Sharon. it's appreciated

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

There's a lot of wisdom in these words of yours. Everything we need to know about living is explained to us by nature. Whether we choose to listen is another thing. Thank you for sharing your poem with us.

[Earthrise]

thank you for reading and listening, Carlos. i'm glad you enjoyed it