You Took Me

You took my days and my nights 

all my dreams and my frights 

turned them against me-- 

give them back! 

Thief! 

Thief! 

You who stole my hours 

my very thoughts! 

Who reached deep into my mind to find 

dusty treasure, 

my mind that is but a crowded woods 

You came in the night as shadow 

and in the morn as light 

You've uprooted everything every little thing 

You are no Robin Hood! 

 

You stole my heart 

and I want it back... 

...don't I?

Reviews

[Ranger Nadaly]

The poem's direction is great. The ending fits nicely.

[Aura Devour]

You've eloquently depicted the condition of a person who falls in love.. nice one :)