Meteor storm

A Poem by Ed Fagan

I had a relaxing night

There are dead people beneath me.
I sit here, smoke my cigar

watch the stars ...

my problems seem to dissipate ....
at least for a little while.

© 2016 Ed Fagan

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Gee

Must be God...at least he has removed one hand from under his arse to hold his cigar !
Good morning

Posted 5 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Hello. thank you for reading this modest piece.

charlie

This poem glows with an understated simplicity. I liken it to a well framed photograph, (landscape lens), zoomed out so as to bring you in.
Nicely done.

Posted 7 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

3 Years Ago

Thank you. sorry for the long delay in a response. I haven't been on here in years.

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Added on September 11, 2016
Last Updated on September 11, 2016

Author

Ed Fagan

Charlotte, NC

About

I make no claim to be Poet nor a Writer ... I simply sneak off to the keyboard or one of my beloved typewriters when no one is looking. I came here to post and to read the work of other writers... more..