Want

On thy verge to greatness comes peril.
No incline without first decent.
A trudge of all we lack combined together.
The pressure of a new craving.
Like a junkies fix.
Like Hades River of Styx
We all just try to strive.

 

Reviews

[Jude]

I really like this
It made me think

[Butterflymom]

I really enjoyed this piece. It has drawn me back several times as a matter of fact. For some reason when I reviewed it before the site was acting weird and never showed it! Nicely done, and well stated.