Gone

the story as my brother was leaving to Oklahoma on Monday. This is my point of veiw on it.

Sitting in the buss stop

had to be the longest thing

I have ever done

or so it seems

at least to me it felt like forever

listening as he said this was really what he wanted

how he knew what he was doing.

I knew that somehow he was right

but that didn't make me listen

it did make me space out though

I didn't listen

not untill the buss person said

that it was time to board the buss

only then did I soak up everything he was saying

only then I tried to remember everything

his laugh,

         his smile,

his voice,

       his tears

and only after

that big buss left around the corner

did I realise,

that my big brother

was

gone

Author's Note

Again, I hve writers block and this was just a "un blocker" (I guess) but it was based off of my brother leaving on this pas monday so it was a little hard to write. It's not one of my best, but I'm in a slump right now so my best might not show for along time. Please ignore All Spelling and Grammer mistakes(like always) and please Review(but only after you read)

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[Sargroth]

I'm really sorry. *hugs*