Love and Blame

Why should we move,

Only based on what you say?

Best to not delay,

Karma's gonna come around soon,

Is maybe what we pray,

Waiting for the day,

We will see the fall of you, who,

Make it so hard to love you,

And how could you?

Make it a war, to get to your heart?

This time I thought,

Maybe it was different.

I should not have listened.

I knew but in my heart,

I, trusted without reason.

Hoped I could believe in,

Something I saw in your eyes.

Guess I'm still drunk on your wine,

Now I'm not feeling so fine.

This game that we've been playing,

Finally went over the line.

Feelings don't lie, but clearly you do,

And I don't get used, unless I want to.

We're both wrong,

It's your fault, it's my fault,

We're to blame, 

We're the same.

Reviews

[Jade]

I really enjoyed this write, full of emotions in this, nicely presented

[Hsnx]

Wow.. Amazing poem.. Loved it.... Amazed... It is not single person who does wrong thing... Blame is on both always...

[Edizen]

Thanks for the review, I was starting to think the message of the poem wasn't presented properly an so I thought i was no good, but seeing you hit the nail on the head makes me feel a little relieved but I do need to improve I think. but thank you