808s & Heartbreak

Love It or Hate It.

Everything hit me at once

How could I have been such a dunce

I gave you all of my trust 

Now I only think of you in disgust

You were with him that night

You said you felt contrite

A tear comes down my face,

When I rushed out of that place

    

Its so heartbreaking that you did that 

Now I guess you're just another stat

You cheated on me and I can't manage

My heart needs a bandage

Depression seeks in quick

This pain weighs thick

I wasn't use to heartbreak

So now I live with heartache

Author's Note

Didn't go over it just wrote it and put it up!

Reviews

[Wynter Ignatius]

I've been cheated on every time in my three relationships, so I can feel a similar pain to this. We give our trust to another or as the quote goes;

"Love it giving someone the power to destroy you... but trusting them not to." - Unknown

It is unfortunate you dealt with this but times change. They were not right for you not because they cheated so much but rather they failed to respect you and did not take the above quote to heart.

We often trust the wrong people, we all know this, but if we don't trust anyone we can not be loved. It is a delicate balance on the edge of a blade we all endure rather than fall upon the point.

[Jack Kennedy]

Ahh that quote was great and also very original! That ks for the review and the kind words as well. It meant a lot believe it or not! (Ha that rhymed)

[Claire]

I feel as I can relate. We've all been there. Very good write. Keep up the good work.

[Cory Barrett]

So many of us have felt this pain. it's an awful and difficult thing to come back from. One of the few mortal wounds.

[A. Amos]

Interesting write my friend, enjoyed the read...

[Kasey Miriam]

This embodies the feeling of heartbreak well. Very good structure. The poem is relatable and I give kudos to you. Good job!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

It's everyone's nightmare getting cheated on, many people can relate to this poem. Stunning write.

Kaze~ :-D

[Jack Kennedy]

Thanks for the review!! Hope this leads you to my other works! Take Care

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

It was my pleasure. :-)

[Jack Kennedy]

Inspired by Kanye West's Polarizing 4th album titled the same as my poem!!! Go listen to the album!!! I recommend it HEAVILY!!!