Just Know

I remember everything... Just Know

Just know I loved you since I first laid eyes on you
Just know as soon as I saw you we were meant to be
Just know I will never stop my pursuit for your love     
Just know no matter what you will always be mine  
Just know that I only intend the best for us and our love
Just know that I'll love you forever and a few more 
Just know the police nor your family won't find us here 
Just know I have this arsenic for us both to take  
Just know we will be together forever in the afterlife
Just know we will be together for all of eternity

Author's Note

Hope this went according to plan, sweet and soft to kinda creepy to this guys crazy. Haha, I feel rusty but it'll he gone in the next one

Reviews

[Stephanie M]

I like how you use a dark undertone in your love poem.

[gutlesswonder]

Definitely fits the theme of dark Valentines day!
I think the repetition does help with the creepiness, but perhaps not every line (I eventually just started skipping the "Just knows"'s and read the lines as though they were indented 2 words in). That's probably just me though.
Very interesting balance of emotions here in general. Not sure whether to "awww" or call the police.

[Jack Kennedy]

I'm sorry the indents were not supposed to be there. I will fix them asap, i don't even know how that even happened but anyways thank you for the review.

[gutlesswonder]

Oh no no! It was nothing on your end, I meant that my eyes started skipping a few "Just knows" in there.

[Calamity]

The crazy sure came across, right like wham!
Good one.

[Jack Kennedy]

That was the mission ha. Thank you

[Kasey Miriam]

The repitition of lines is excellent! it helps with the creepiness. very well done

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you!! Always great to hear your opinion, i actualy believe them. Thank you again

[Kasey Miriam]

You are very welcome. I try to give helpful reviews.

[Saddam]

eventually a very good of view poetry..... Thanks for sharing.

[Jack Kennedy]

Eventually? Thank you for reviewing it

[Saddam]

Means that day was not good for me then I read you so Eventually I got some relief. Most welcome friend.

[Jennie Baron]

Creepy, messed up, an insight into an insane, obsessive mind--all that but it makes for a great poem. It's good to read your work again, Jack.

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you!!! Feels good to be back after the small sabbacitical

[Luna Zerimar]

I agree with Laura.

Messed up, but romantic. x

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the review, glad you liked it!

[NoelHC]

As the internet meme goes "Well, that escalated quickly!" An interesting concept, written quite well.
One small thing I noted in the line " Just know the police nor your family won't find us here"
To use nor that should be " Just know (neither) the police nor your family will find us here
which kind of messes up the flow, so just go with " Just know the police or your family won't find us here"

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the suggestion, i will surely use it and also thanks for the review

[Laura Lynn]

This is crazy, even more messed up than Romeo and Juliet

[Jack Kennedy]

Good? Bad? Mixed? Don't know what to make of it?

[Laura Lynn]

If horror movies are good, I know sometimes they are, then yes

[Jack Kennedy]

Cool, thank you once again

[Ana B.]

woa....sinister and with the emotion of love....perfect :)

[Jack Kennedy]

Thank you for the reviews! Appreciate them all