Ghosts

Rhyming thoughts.

You say you want love

But you’re not even trying

Clinging on to the past

You’re too scared of dying.

But as time goes on

And you reminisce

You’ll learn to regret

The one that you missed.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Lost in Wonderland]

deep thoughts in few words. nice job

[Starcaller]

I think it is beautiful...you know in that sad but totally awesome way :D

[Amy Bumpas]

Gets right to the point...strong feelings here...

[Cassie Fraga]

mmmhhmmm.... regret is that little something that nobody can destroy only silence for awhile...
very nice read!! can relate to it in so many different ways.. keep it up!!

[Lowesy]

good job, i think that if you threw away a few commas here and here you would have a much easier and better flow but i do like it the way it is!