Fear and Fantasy

I was listening to someone tell me a story about a friend........

Fear and Fantasy

 

She lives in fantasy filled with fear

Reality based on fiction

Fiction derived from untruths

Untruths taking over

Causing much discord

Discord not peace

Feels chaos

Empty

Fear

Reviews

[Debbie_Philly]

WOW.... i felt every emotion and fear in this piece... very well conveyed

[EileenMarie]

Thank you :)

[Marie]

Very good form... good description of a mixed up woman...

[EileenMarie]

Yes she's very mixed up... Thanks for the review :)

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I am really enjoying your nonnets! As I told you, I wasn't familiar with the form, but it is really growing on me and you seem to have the knack of it.

As to your note below - Funny to me how when I get in a vein of something, it is as if my mind just starts thinking in examples of it. I don't rhyme much, but if I begin, then I start thinking in strange clips of rhyme! Too bad I can't usually translate that into a final and uncontrived piece very often. Here I go again...on and on...and on

Back to your poem.
"fantasy filled with fear" fun to say! (difficult to deal with though)

This shows your insight into your friend's situation. "Reality based on fiction
Fiction derived from untruths" perhaps we have all been there

One small note, and just my take - I think "chaotic" might work better than "chaos", but then, "feels chaos" makes sense as well. Now that I think about it, if you use "chaotic" you might have to change "fear" to "afraid" - hmmmm - now, I feel like a bit of a meddler. :/ Either way...keep going!

[EileenMarie]

ha ha..... no I love imput!! BUT chaos is 2 syllables and chaotic is 3....... :) that's when I turn to my thesaurus!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

SB slaps her forehead and says, "Oh, yeah. The syllable thing!" Sorry, just erase and rewind. LOL

[EileenMarie]

Another Nonnet :) I get caught up in writing styles........