Rain

The window reflects the rain spraying delicately down from above

Effortlessly the water bounces on the pavement

Could this be a metaphor of love?

or nothing but a symbol of life’s hurtful dent

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

interesting comparing rain and love, I enjoy this very much.

[Wondering Mind]

Oh, deep reflection on opposite possibilities in life's manifestations.

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

powerful, profound.......

[Autumn]

Stunning description of rain. Nice choice of words! This poems makes you think about love and life at the same time..great job!

[Dr. Wood ?]

i have rarely seen rain described in this fashion...very good

[Debbie_Philly]

I believe water can be the metaphor for allot of things in life... and most certainly l; love ... really good .. I like this allot !!!

[....]

Such a wonderful write.

[Owlgirl]

Short, but powerful, great writing, amazing!

[afra]

short but deep ...good job

[Marissa]

i like it...it's nice and short haha (: