I Miss You

This isn't a poem about love lost. It is the tragedy of love gained

It's the beauty in things

That are long lasting sins

A knife for a back

A helping hand

Author's Note

After some time of thinking and new things happening, I am back. Please review and leave your thoughts. As always thank you in advance!

Reviews

[Laurierose]

This reminds me of a painting with various hues. Though each profoundly different, each tone tell a beautiful tale. Each stanza holds its own duality, and truth. Great read.

[blerdsmith34]

Brief but with so much truth. Lovely and haunting.

[Suzanne Janfada Balov]

Beautiful and elegant but strong impacting. Loved it

[AizenJ]

Wonderful poetry, strong and very eloquent. Wonderfully written, well done. ^_^

[Crowley]

The dichotomy of the line and where to place the object and deed along it. What a great thought provoker. It feels supernatural...just sayin'

[Neville]

An interesting perspective & certainly one for me to ponder a while... however, as far as gut reaction is concerned, I already like your 'I Miss You'............. Neville

[A.G.]

Beautiful poem. short but meaningful and strong. I enjoyed it! thanks for sharing (:
-Angelina

[Final-Karma]

Thank you for reviewing! I am glad you enjoyed

[An owl on the moon]

Such powerful contrasts of color, of light and darkness, of pain and pleasure. Love has a way of opening doors to either wondrous ecstasy or all the horrors of a heart cut open. So richly voiced.

[Final-Karma]

Thank you so much! Your work is just as amazing.

[Iam-me]

Interesting poem. Thought-provoking and deep to say the least. Pondering on this one for quite awhile...

[Final-Karma]

Thank you! I hope you can understand it soon.