Bi-Polar

The title says it all...I thought about writing more, but I like it how it is.

 

^Mania

Joy, Happiness, ^Elation

Energizing, succeeding, living

Free, Alive, Alone, Dead

Disheartening, Dejecting, _Falling

Guilt, _anger, loneliness

Depression

Anxious, Shy, _irritable

Crying, _failing, lying

_Small, isolated, awake, ^euphoric

^Jumping, laughing, thinking

Aware, artistic, Fearless

Mania

 

^Up

 

 

_Down

 

           Repeat

 

                        The       Cycle

          

          Again

 

 

 

Reviews

[Benjamal]

Thats crazy cool! I like the jumbled words, and how well they fit the words!

[Laughing Lunatic]

Awsome write!!! Very creative and just so true.You've got my vote!!!

[Kaelani]

that is so cool i love the way the font is. it speaks to me! haha

[chris' girlfriend]

wow so creative

Very well done in my eyes too. I read your other review and I like what was said. I go through those feelings like every day and it's within a few mineuts that I change so quickly... Very good any way though! Kudos!!!! And I'm sorry I can't spell that good.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

A tough and difficult thing to write about I know but Iike the dislocated flow of the words which describes the disease rather well - especially the manic episodes although the lows as well. Kudos to you for taking on the task - very well done.
Light,
Siddartha

[*Kantola*]

That was an interesting way to write a poem. The way that you wrote the words, and the poem, changed how it effects/affects (i can never get those right >

[Jester]

wow, I really like how you used the actual placement of the text and the font size to impact the poem.

[Isidora]

Um...wow... Remember that I told you about my uncle? This is just like him...I suspect his is more arbitrary and related to what he wants and wants not to do, but...

Also sounds like other people I know...I really like it...