I close my eyes and wish you here

I close my eyes

and wish you here

I close my eyes 

and hope you'll come over

crawl in under the blankets

touch me soflty

hold me sweetly

and give me kisses 

to slowly wake me up

I close my eyes

and wish you here

to turn over in bed

and bury myself into you

into your arms

your safe and loving arms. 

I close my eyes

and wish you here

to give me kisses 

and make me forget about the world

just for a bit. 

I close my eyes

and wish you here. 

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Nice and sweet, longing for love to be present, really enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.

[Elie Marie]

thank you :)

[Gee]

The beds to big without you,my world a lonely place,I long to hold you In my arms,and kiss your handsome face..........Is that what you're saying,really liked the poem.

[Elie Marie]

something like that :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Being apart leave us wishing for someone missed. I liked the want and the wish in the words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Elie Marie]

thank you.

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

Yeah awesome poem and a brilliant way of using your words,and the emotions behind this poem are beautifully expressed keep writing =)

[Elie Marie]

thanks, that's really nice :)

[ANTO]

This is gorgeous Elie Marie. A Saturday morning down-filled duvet of a poem.
Thanks for the RR
:))

[Elie Marie]

Thanks so much.

[~]

I hope your wishes will come true Elie!

[Elie Marie]

aww thanks :)

[~]

:) Welcome!

[Cool Girl]

Very sad with a hint of small hope.. I like it!

[Elie Marie]

sounds right. thanks :)

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome!!