Snails

A short poem about snails

Snails snails,

Alot slower than whales

Riding along the ocean rails

 

They swim and swim the Atlantic rim

While the lights are becoming dim

 

They are very small,

Not that tall,

As they crawl and crawl and crawl

 

 

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[EmpressPoetess]

Elijah, I really like this! It has a very nice flow and your subject matter is charming! Thank you for sharing this!

Empress

[Fran Marie]

Snails, reminds me of the way the post office delivers mail~slow~ very, very, slow lol