A Family of Deer

Nature

A fam'ly of deer

Running through the forest rains

Refreshes their soul

Reviews

[Fran Marie]

Great Haiku Elijah ~ You have Family spelled wrong

and need to omit/drop one syllable in the first line

Family is a 3 count syllable unless you want to write it fam'ly

I will accept it as 2 syllables and you wont have to drop any

THanks for the entry~ I really like this a lot~Nana