Rain

Nature

A dazzle of rain

Waters the gardens and plants

Which we will consume

Reviews

[Butterflymom]

This is awesome. Very well done. I love the rain.

[DanaRegen]

Congrats on winning, and lovely poem. I love rain its so refreshing, and relaxing to me. Nice work Elijah!
-Dana :)

[Salvatore Buttaci]

Congratulations for winning Haiku #6 Contest!

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good write liked it

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

A good piece! I like it. Wishing you always.

[Fran Marie]

Great write about the rain and so nicely done in the Haiku form~

THanks for sharing in the What's Your Haiku Contest~