Our Blue Lagoon

A string of Haikus

In our blue lagoon

Lies crocodiles and bats

That can eat you whole

Waters are poison

Do not go near them or else

Soon you shall perish

Bats own the above

Do not even think to go near

Or bad things occur

Croc's lurk the waters

No boat has ever pasted them

Ships fill the bottom

Millions have perished

Trying to pass through the murk

None have succeeded

 

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

AWESOME!!!! :D

[Fran Marie]

I agree with Kim this is a very creative string of haiku verse

WeLL DonE Elijah

[deeps]

Cool! I like how you have this layed out, very creative.