Volcano

Explosions erupt from it's depths

it was angered while he slept

burning down forest trees

that's the only thing you'd see

taking magma from the core

causing disasters, blood, and gore

it seeps down through the mountains

making endless lava fountains

causing citizens to lose their homes

to these senseless volcanic domes

it's a terrible thing, the devils treat

but God will never suffer defeat!

Reviews

[T. Hart]

You write well for an 11 year old. I like this poem. I like the rhyming, the rhythm, and the flow of the writing.

[Fran Marie]

A very descriptive piece so well expressed and well crafted~Good Job!!