The Bullet Flies

Rocking back and forth

On her bed she cries

No time left to say

Her sad final goodbyes

All the pain she's caused

Clouding her misty eyes

Promising she'll not live

To speak anymore lies

She can't stay anymore

No matter how hard she tries

So with the gun to her lips

The bullet flies

Author's Note

Kinda deppressing, I know, but what do you think?

Reviews

[DemitriJ]

Its sad, but very true. Though most won't admit to it, everyone has felt this at some point in their life. Beautiful.

[Cerise]

Wooow...its amazingly written...u really have a unique way of capturing words...loved the ending..:)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

Thanks:) I love words and the power that putting them in just the right order seems to give, the satisfaction:) It's amazing for me:)