Quiver

I'm re-sumbiting this because i revised it into a write with much more passion.

A pattering on my neck,

A lip so calm and so content.

A quivering sigh,

Lamentingly bliss,

And so immaculate…

A shivering hand,

Mourning your touch

And a fervor silence demanding my clutch,

My eyes, my sight, bask in your blue light.

A night time glimpse,

Our skin so close,

A gentle blush to our lingering lips.

Like a tinted rose,

Our fingers grow together

A craving so far and everlasting,

Our passion embalmed forever.

Our chests breathe tenderly,

And our palms pressed leisurely.

I found delicate devotion in your hold,

And a glint under your brow,

An olive lush hue in your eye,

And an ardor hush in your cry.

Author's Note

sometimes like poe and other poets i like to some what create new words

Reviews

[Anthony Q Armstrong]

It is really freaking amazing:) i give a 100/100
And i love the fact that new words can be created just through trying to a great poet.

[Ellie Howard]

thank you very much!