Cloud

Relating a cloud to life.

Life is like a fluffy cloud
Floating along
At it's own pace
Singing it's own song

All fluffy
Full of air

A personality
A face

Crying like us
Screaming like us
Dreaming like us

Poof
Gone like us

Author's Note

Not my greatest but say what you think

Reviews

[Erin Thomas]

Wow. Short and sweet, but it really gets the point across. All of my short poems end up being extremely cliche. This is awesome! I never thought of that metaphor. I think the length of the poem also speaks to the last stanza. Just like us, the clouds and the poem disappear before our very eyes. Great work! Keep writing!

[Ellejune]

Thankyou

[Chris Rampersad]

You write pretty good poems. short and to the point and sweet. i like it.

[Ellejune]

Thankyou

[PoeticVandal]

A personification of cloud beautifully done....